Notes About The Poem

Ebb and Flow

day turns
into night
then day
then night
again

the sun
the moon
go on
dancing
yet you're
still gone



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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June 18, 2021 at 6:38 AM
In the end, darkness swept over the land. Very well said, and the picture is stunning too.
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June 18, 2021 at 8:09 PM
thanks ~
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