eau de memoire

you can't smell a sunset
though the wispy clouds
that frame the waning twilight
feel like a fragrant memory

like ~ leaving the room
      and pausing...
one last backward glance
that becomes yesterday

    - no eye contact -

just a slight upward curl
at lip's edge...that fades
like the beach rose scent
on the surf's briny whisper..

until, it all becomes one
    in the night
~almost like the day 
never happened

yet, its essence 
will awaken every second
on some tomorrow...
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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Excellent free verse. I am guessing you will be poet in first place of this total marathon when all is said and done. Congrats love this poem .
Toney Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Craig, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 26 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. The 2025 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers' FINAL Placement Contest will begin soon after all Qualifiers Have Been Notified by Soup Mail. For more information see my Mile 26 Checkpoint blog.
K. Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:40 AM
...Just wanted to drop by and thank you for my placement, wow! Made me smile I could place that high in your contest :D And so grateful that I was able to write something decent after several years. Can you believe it, last poem I posted here was 7 years ago?! Also inspired by your contest. Thanks for the inspiration, Craig :)! Your contests sure make me try to eke out something...Soup sure seems different though, quieter? Or yeah it's just me.
K. Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Amazing isn't it how our senses come together to evoke memories? Love how you connected sunset to a fragrant memory. Was this lovely poem this for an example for your perfume bottle? A wee confession, I was supposed to enter that but couldn't come up with a decent write, only draft and it was too dark-- haha was inspired by that movie, Perfume (about a serial murderer) Anyhoo. I checked back and saw your Forts and Castle poem and a poem sprouted much quicker con't
Cornish Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Nikko, thank you, it's so much better to write to something that inspires rather than "just because" and I'm honored that my subtle nudges are an inspiration!
Puddifoot Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 4:26 AM
lovely evocative free verse, really like that ending..thx for placement in your contest :)
Crandall Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 8:07 PM
Very nice description of a sunset!
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Beautiful!
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