Eating Cake

The proud princess of New Denny.
Supposed she was superior to many.
She mocked their low station
Said they disgraced the nation.
'Tis no mystery why she died at 20.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:34 PM
:) let them eat cake! nice limerick Paul. :)
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April 22, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, Casarah. It's plain and simple, but—as you suggest—has a historical antecedent. I appreciate your kindness in taking time to comment.
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:08 PM
made me smile - hope you are keeping well Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
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April 22, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Jan. I'm quite certain a 5th grader could have written it, but I thought the "cake" reference gave it some validity. * * * It's kind of you to ask about my health. I'm an old man (my photo is a fraud) . . . at the age in which you hurt in places you didn't know you had. But, no complaints; just gratitude for the years I've had.
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