Eating a Banana In a Down Pour

eating a banana in a down pour

noah   noah 
get out here and start 
clouds are gathering over the hill

in a minute
just making plans 
pass those bananas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 17, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Third day in a row I got sucked in by the title! Guess it's time so say something:-) Rain drives me bananas! Fun PO! ~ j
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October 17, 2017 at 8:17 PM
I know I am a baaaaad girl, just could not stop myself. lol Thanks for coming back.
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October 15, 2017 at 4:12 AM
Oh Larks! You may well offend a few in-house Creationists with this one, Patricia. Please pipe down, Tom -- go and take a cruise! ...or something or other. Still laughing, Patricia - funny as hell!! With warmest affection. :) john
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October 15, 2017 at 8:53 AM
However it is meant...it is still brilliantly funny - lol! :)
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October 15, 2017 at 7:48 AM
I see what you men! Used it as it is one of my favourite fruits. I meant to be a comment on men's innate tendency to procrastinate chores at home. lol Well it is true meaning is in the mind of the reader. Thank you John.
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