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Eating a Banana In a Down Pour

eating a banana in a down pour noah noah get out here and start clouds are gathering over the hill in a minute just making plans pass those bananas

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/17/2017 8:10:00 PM

Third day in a row I got sucked in by the title! Guess it's time so say something:-) Rain drives me bananas! Fun PO! ~ j

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/17/2017 8:17:00 PM

I know I am a baaaaad girl, just could not stop myself. lol Thanks for coming back.

John Fleming

Date: 10/15/2017 4:12:00 AM

Oh Larks! You may well offend a few in-house Creationists with this one, Patricia. Please pipe down, Tom -- go and take a cruise! ...or something or other. Still laughing, Patricia - funny as hell!! With warmest affection. :) john

John Fleming
Date: 10/15/2017 8:53:00 AM

However it is meant...it is still brilliantly funny - lol! :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/15/2017 7:48:00 AM

I see what you men! Used it as it is one of my favourite fruits. I meant to be a comment on men's innate tendency to procrastinate chores at home. lol Well it is true meaning is in the mind of the reader. Thank you John.