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Eat Your Heart Out - 21

Self consuming
the tender bits you
overlooked

Here I am
Sating myself again



03/19/2019

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Silent One

March 24, 2019 at 6:59 AM

to sate or not to sate... and what to sate and what not... this be the questions...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 24, 2019 at 9:37 AM

...and what sates ;)

Jeff Connelly

March 20, 2019 at 5:35 PM

Maureen, I really feel bad coming back to a poem I admire. My mind is comment enough; so is this " comment". Maureen you shoul be published!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 5:41 PM

Almost was ;) thank You! Would love to, if I could wrap my brain around it...

Robert Lindley

March 20, 2019 at 4:06 PM

My dear friend, eat to heart's content! Love it...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 5:36 PM

Ah, you are awesome my friend! Thank you! xomo <3

John Lawless

March 20, 2019 at 2:31 PM

Well Mo it seems to be a "sate-isfying" arrangement.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 3:52 PM

mutual satiation ~ oh that sounds bad...

Mystic Rose Rose

March 20, 2019 at 11:24 AM

When the heart is wholesome sating comes easy. Love your jewel bit, xo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 3:53 PM

that it does, and the reverse is true ;) Thank you Pixie Dust! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

March 20, 2019 at 9:46 AM

You do so much in twenty-one syllables. I am clapping and my muse is lying back, irritated and angry that you do so well with such a constrained prompt. Ha! If we could not sate ourselves, can you imagine? I cannot.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 3:58 PM

thank you so much Caren! I find there is some prejudice towards short form, that it's too easy, but I can spend days on a little poem, some have even taken years to write ;) xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 20, 2019 at 8:18 AM

It will serve him right! Tha's my girl! haha! Witty dearest, Maureen!! Hugs xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 3:50 PM

thank you dear Demetrios! Hugs & Giggles! xomo

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

March 20, 2019 at 7:08 AM

Good one Maureen, I get it!...I totally get it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 8:15 AM

Hugs, giggles, and thank you! :) xomo

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

March 20, 2019 at 7:08 AM

Jeff Connelly

March 19, 2019 at 10:48 PM

My first thought was the serpent eating it's own tail perpetually. "Self consuming" and "Sating myself again". Am I reading too much into this? And yet the title suggests someone else. Their heart. I find myself mesmerized but these lines Maureen. Perhaps I've over thought it or I got it, but that is what is wonderful about this poem.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 20, 2019 at 8:13 AM

The snake is in there, read as deep or as shallow as you wish ;) Thank you my friend. xomo

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