Notes About The Poem

Easy To See Sentinel

The widow's walk planks worn thin
A dark shadow paces in time
As each ship struggles past the rock
A bride swiftly up the steps climb

As the storm thrashes upon it
The lighthouse continues to beam
Though the ocean is tossed, sailors
Can still of home and brides dream

Silt from ocean's bottom is stirred
As the bride watches the fierce storm
Holding onto the lighthouse's promise
Her anxious thoughts tossed in this rainstorm

With the strength of lighthouse's structure
She lets anxiety swiftly flee
Her love will be guided by the light
That shines for all to easily see  

Inspired by Eve Roper's contest Sentinel Quatrain Form
Written April 11, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations Sara.... Lovely win. Linda
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sara
Turner Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Back to say congratulations Ms Sara on your win in the contest. I knew it was a winner when I first read it. Peace sweet lady
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Sara, congratulations on your Second Place win in 'the sentinel contest'. Hugs, Sandra
Sathasivam Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Excellent. Well crafted and expressed. All the best for the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Nice how you blended the image of the lighthouse with a sailor's bride. It is fun seeing different takes on this topic.
Onclaud Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 2:49 PM
wonderfully rendered, sara... you glow with this finw piece!..huggs
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Well crafted and expressed... a super quatrain with fine rhyming and cadence. Well done Sara! Best wishes, Keith
Turner Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 5:48 PM
I hope you entered this in the contest, Ms Sara. It is a beauty! Peace young lady:):)
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Thanks for the visit to my page..I am delighted that you enjoyed my poem..Sara
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