Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Eastern Sky

Looking East pines dark
Silhouetted by
Early sun rising
In distance light fog
Settles on creek, trees

Sun slowly rises
Scene changes now
Roosters crow greets
The rising sun

Whispy cloud
Goes from gray
Magenta

Sun graces
Eastern

Sky

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James Fraser August 12, 2009 at 10:44 AM Nice poem Sara, not seen this form before>>James

Gareth Heslop August 11, 2009 at 2:54 PM aaaah...this makes me relaxed and calm...lovely work...grrth

Jan Harvey August 11, 2009 at 9:31 AM This is scenic nature. Your sense of grace shines through. Not overrated, a beauty of its' own. Great for a morning person/ night owl either. Very nice. Thanks, Jan

Jessica Arteaga August 11, 2009 at 6:34 AM thanks for the this grand example of a diminished hexaverse, every line an image, i enjoyed your poem