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Easter Lily Parade

It's a burst of spring
the Easter Parade of hues!
Lilies dance on streets
in creams and reds, deep green phase
dazed orange yellow bliss maze.

Heartbeat of rebirth
while the flaming redbird sings
amidst subtle scents.
Colorful celebration
Garden party location.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Hello Evelyn, I picture this easter parade of flowers. A beautiful scene, also my fav. Hugs. /Dar,lene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Hello Evelyn, Your welcome Evelyn. Your welcomer for both. Blessings and hugs. back. ?Darlene/
Buehler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Hello Darlene, I'm so glad that you can picture this Easter parade. What a fine compliment! Thank you so much for that, and also for your fave. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Bowring Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 3:52 PM
Dear Evelyn, this is such a heartwarming, delightful read with exquisite imagery. Love the title too. Your beautiful so well crafted choice of words depicts such a glorious scene filled with colour and fragrances of the season. The line, ‘ Heartbeat of rebirth’ really stood out for me. You have captured the essence of spring! Loved this. Thank you for sharing dear friend and may your spring be filled with joy. Hugs and smiles :):)
Buehler Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Many thanks for the loveliness of your comment, Christina. So happy that you enjoyed this poem. I hope your Easter is wonderful this year. Hugs and smiles. :):)
Magdalinos Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Hello Evelyn,so lovely poem with a wonderful message. Have a blessed day.
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:33 PM
Hello Mulu, my deepest thanks to you. I hope your day is wonderful, too. :)
Kauffman Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Oh, Evelyn, my heart just danced in the color and fragrance of your "garden party" on parade. Your choice of words brought me right into the garden and all of its delights! Thank you for this harbinger of joy! Blessings to you, my friend! You have such a wonderful capacity for joy!
Buehler Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Dear Sam, I'm so pleased that you attended my 'garden party.' I thank you for each of your wonderful compliments. It's delightful to know you enjoyed this poem. Blessings and hugs. :)
Rolland Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 3:45 PM
extraordinay poem, such words blossom, waw, thanks poet
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:05 PM
You're quite welcome, Yann. Thank you for your awesome comment. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Spring bursting with exciting colors!
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Enchanting, colorful spring! :):):)
One Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 12:07 PM
A lovely poem full of lovely imagery..
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Such lovely flowers, though we go for carnations here. O let spring come so I can admire the various colors of hibiscus. Lovely poem as expected.
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Carnations and hibiscus are exquisite flowers, too. I love them all! Thank you for the very nice compliment. :)
Ashley Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Dear Evelyn, your capture the celebratory essence of Spring and Easter with vibrant beauty and impassioned finesse. "Lilies dance on streets" and "flaming redbird sings" and "Garden party" amplifies the joyous imagery with brilliant artistry within the Tanka form. Splendid verse! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:53 PM
It's so great to know you liked this poem of joy and celebration, dear friend. Heartfelt thanks for your warm remarks. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 8:39 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a pretty lily picture. Spring/Easter will be here soon... Have a blessed/fun day writing away..........
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:45 PM
So delightful to know you enjoyed this, Paula! Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me. I hope your day is very nice, too. :)
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Much enjoyed the beautiful imagery, Evelyn: Lilies dance on streets in creams and reds, deep green phase dazed orange yellow bliss maze...
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Your enthusiastic comments are very gratifying, my friend. Thank you so much for your valued response. :)
Empress Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:36 AM
So picturesque and so poetically pleasing this is as always. I can see through your words, lilies dancing. And your use of colors too enhance the beauty of your lines. “ Heartbeat of rebirth while the flaming redbird sings” gorgeous! Soulful! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always. Definitely a fave for me
Buehler Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Your remarks are so much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed this parade. Thank you for your kind fave, and for the smiles you've brought to my day. Blessings.
Greenhough Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 7:21 PM
No lilies here yet. I loved this poem. We need some colorful parades after a long winter.
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:39 PM
No lilies here yet, either, but I look forward to their gorgeous appearance. Thank you for your lovely remarks.
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:30 PM
I love how you use all the colors! I don’t know how to write this form so kudos to you!
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:27 PM
Dear Karen, thank you so much for your treasured compliment. Also, it's a rare person who excels at all of the poetry forms.
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