Earth's River

A walk on a warm winter's day
   Birds chirping and children at play
Folks smiling 'neath squinting sunshine
   Earth's river flows peaceful today
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Bush Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 7:44 PM
We're getting a taste of summer, 86 dgs here on Thursday. I think I much prefer your Spring on time.
Wolf Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 2:25 AM
How 'bout our 6-12 inches of snow on its way? Prefer that, Sunshine?! LOL. ~ Winter Wonder-boy
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:44 PM
Wonderful imagery Gershon..
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Have to maintain my stellar image, you know. LOL. Thank, Jenish! Smiles, Gershon
Ashley Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Such beauty and serenity flows from your wonderful pen, Gershon. Imagery one can feel and appreciate. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Lol! No, no need to visit your eye doc anytime soon :) Thank you, my dear friend, for the warm embrace!
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Hadn't realized that iI need to see my optometrist. For a moment there, I thought that 'Susan Ashley' had left a comment... Quadruple take. OMG. I am so happy to see your avatar!! God bless you and Tiny Tim! Thank you, and Warmest wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:53 PM
And how lovely that is! Our day was fairly nice and as surely as Flip Wilson said, “Here comes da judge,” the rain starts up again tomorrow.
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Haha. Here too. Rain mixed with that four-letter word, snxx. Nice while it lasted! :) Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, as i read this poem i could see the river flow. have a nice evening my friend.
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Glad the river image worked for you, my friend. Thank you, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 2:53 PM
Gorgeous, Gershon. I'm aching to hear sounds of spring. Words will do.
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Words will have to do most winter days. Oh, well. ~ Gershon
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 2:49 PM
what a serene picture you paint GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for the lovely compliment. I was thinking of how William Saroyan, author of 'The Human Comedy,' viewed life. Here's to Spring! :) gw
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