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Earth's River

A walk on a warm winter's day Birds chirping and children at play Folks smiling 'neath squinting sunshine Earth's river flows peaceful today

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/24/2020 7:44:00 PM
We're getting a taste of summer, 86 dgs here on Thursday. I think I much prefer your Spring on time.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2020 2:25:00 AM
How 'bout our 6-12 inches of snow on its way? Prefer that, Sunshine?! LOL. ~ Winter Wonder-boy
Date: 2/23/2020 11:44:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Gershon..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/24/2020 4:48:00 PM
Have to maintain my stellar image, you know. LOL. Thank, Jenish! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 7:43:00 PM
Such beauty and serenity flows from your wonderful pen, Gershon. Imagery one can feel and appreciate. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/23/2020 8:15:00 PM
Lol! No, no need to visit your eye doc anytime soon :) Thank you, my dear friend, for the warm embrace!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 7:49:00 PM
Hadn't realized that iI need to see my optometrist. For a moment there, I thought that 'Susan Ashley' had left a comment... Quadruple take. OMG. I am so happy to see your avatar!! God bless you and Tiny Tim! Thank you, and Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 6:53:00 PM
And how lovely that is! Our day was fairly nice and as surely as Flip Wilson said, “Here comes da judge,” the rain starts up again tomorrow.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 7:51:00 PM
Haha. Here too. Rain mixed with that four-letter word, snxx. Nice while it lasted! :) Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 5:56:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, as i read this poem i could see the river flow. have a nice evening my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 6:13:00 PM
Glad the river image worked for you, my friend. Thank you, Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 2:53:00 PM
Gorgeous, Gershon. I'm aching to hear sounds of spring. Words will do.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 6:07:00 PM
Words will have to do most winter days. Oh, well. ~ Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 2:49:00 PM
what a serene picture you paint GW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for the lovely compliment. I was thinking of how William Saroyan, author of 'The Human Comedy,' viewed life. Here's to Spring! :) gw

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