Earth's Beating

it’s truly the end the meteorites smash in terror failing land funnels develop destroying once loved places creating chaos next the wave comes in an enormous primal death killing everyone there is nothing left as the sun slowly rises to see Earth’s beating
Russell Sivey Entrant into Gail Doyle's "The End Of The World Armageddon" contest 6/15/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/22/2014 12:09:00 PM
Russell, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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Date: 6/20/2014 9:36:00 AM
A verse that sounds as though it was from a Mayan prophecy that has been interpreted. Wonderful write!! :-)
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:12:00 PM
to the master of short forms, my sweet congrats, russell!.. yes!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Armageddon" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:41:00 PM
Congrats Russell. Well done...Tanya
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:06:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest..these were some scarey writes...lol. BG
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Date: 6/22/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Russell! I like how you made this a bit more personal with the line"destroying once loved places." Love, Kim
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:43:00 PM
I especially like that last one, about the sun being the last left to see EArth beating! congrats, Russell.
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:19:00 PM
great imaginative piece, my friend
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