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Earthquakes

Looked up falt lines on the internet Found out information that I regret Now I am shaking in my boots Living life is not a party hoot Be ready for at any time, quake And life as we know it will take A plunge into the past forsake Be ready at all times don't hesitate

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Date: 1/25/2010 2:24:00 PM
Apt poem for this moment in time, i live on the Great Glen Fault, its where Loch Ness runs >> no earthquakes, but we do get tremors which are hardly felt >> James
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:06:00 PM
I am sure we are all realizing that we are not on the solid land we thought. We have small quakes in my area quite often. Thank you fopr your comments on my latest posting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:02:00 AM
Sara, You have said it well... "Be ready! God in the heart is a must! The faithful are protected through trust. Dead or alive, He will stay by our side if we have upon the righteous trail, a ride. Love to you, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:31:00 PM
Whare do you live again? Be glad you are not in Utah. OUr quake is prepared to explode ANY TIME now!
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:30:00 PM
Factual poem Sara from your gifted pen.. they can happen anywhere its just that some places are more prone than others.. like California... the falt line is shaky at best... enjoyed and learned something too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:30:00 AM
this must have been inspired from above. this says a lot to the reader. good work. John H Loving III
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:38:00 AM
Yes, Sara, thank you for sharing your lines with us. I experienced myself several earthquakes in ranges of 5 to 6 Richter Scale, but luckily was never harmed. I can tell though it is a terrible feeling being within a quake. Here we don't have earthquakes but sometimes heavy storms. Thank you for your kind comments. Keep writing...Gert
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:52:00 PM
Sara thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/21/2010 7:09:00 PM
Good advice anytime Sara. Arkansas has a fault line running across it. I live in south central, which is quite a ways from it tho.Haaa! Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:57:00 PM
Wow,....Sara,...Jehovah's inspired words speak such truths,....fear not lil' one,...you are in the hands of our almighty Creator ! great poetry mine poetic inspiration !!!!! james
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:48:00 PM
good prophesy, God is in control.
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Date: 1/21/2010 2:29:00 PM
That would be very scarey to have to think about all the time but is so true.I am still fighting pnemonia and now I have kidney infections.Never had one before and man do they hurt.Lots of cranberry juice for me.Hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/21/2010 10:18:00 AM
Dare I assume Sara that you live somewhere in the state of California? Yes be ready at all times but without paranoia. Life's too short. Try to enjoy every moment. Another great piece and thanks for all of your past comments on my work. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Sara. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:03:00 AM
Interesting poem about fault lines. I've been in a few quakes, myself. No one knows just where and when one activates. So, indeed, one should be ready.
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