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Earthquake Jf

 
An earthquake size crack down my heart Now that from soup you did depart No more romantic gems To meet those little whims How I long for your awesome art
Sponsor: SKAT A Contest: A Valentine Limerick To The Poet Who Broke My Heart Written: February 2, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:23 PM
I am so bad at guessing these. Anyway, you did a good job of this one. Congrats in the contest.
A   Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Lovely to be back with congratulations and a chance to read this poem again, Sara. All the best. // paul
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Sara, who is FJ.... Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Fabulous imagery! Hope you have great luck with the contest.
La France Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Sara, your poem is beautiful and so is the pic that accompanies it, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
Sathasivam Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 10:50 PM
Excellent. Beautiful tribute. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Horne Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 3:04 PM
good one, my friend - well, I made it onto Soup (determined not to let those comments build up like that again, LOL)
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Lovely tribute to JF he/she must be a sweetie. God bless Sara. Rajat
Callus Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Lovely, moving tribute to your mystery writer, Sara! Friends in poetry are missed so very much when they disappear. And, yes...poetry is an art!! All the best. // paul
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Beautiful tribute Sara - its sad when someone we know leaves soup - I can relate to this one big style - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 11:57 AM
so heartfelt, sara... I would venture a guess but then your sweet piece says it all for this poet.. hugggs
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