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Earthquake

. mother natures plates soil growling with hunger pains digesting earth crumbs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Moonbee Canady
Date: 9/23/2009 2:48:00 PM
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Hey... Here's One... Who Broke The Tectonic plates ? Answer: It was The San Andreas Fault (Yeah, I'm Kooky - but Some have already guessed that... Great Write Abe... MoonBee
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/20/2009 7:31:00 AM
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Oooh, very nice, Abe. This haiku does much more than just paint a picture. It creates wonder and fear of Mother Nature's power. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/18/2009 7:22:00 PM
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Good use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Wonderful last line! So much captured in just three lines. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Carrie Richards
Date: 9/18/2009 5:49:00 PM
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Living in California....we can relate to the hungry earth....it seems to like the West Coastal area..... "knock on wood" we aren't near any major fault line...however we have felt a few shakes over the years! (ps... thank you for your kind comments today. Irene was a dear neighbor.)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/18/2009 4:51:00 PM
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soil growling with hunger..explosion erupts--nice Haiku Abe--Charma
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM
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Soil growing with hunger pains...wicked line.
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Christopher Higgins
Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM
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Soup mail.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 9/18/2009 11:38:00 AM
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Abe, this is excellent! I will read more of your work! Thank you!
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Raul Moreno
Date: 9/18/2009 10:23:00 AM
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You're on a roll with great haiku's, nice work as usual...Raul
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James Fraser
Date: 9/18/2009 10:00:00 AM
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Clever Haiku Abe, another Gem>>James
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