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Earthquake

.                      mother natures plates 
                                         soil growling with hunger pains
                                                digesting earth crumbs

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2009

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Moonbee Canady Date: 9/23/2009 2:48:00 PM Hey... Here's One... Who Broke The Tectonic plates ? Answer: It was The San Andreas Fault (Yeah, I'm Kooky - but Some have already guessed that... Great Write Abe... MoonBee Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/20/2009 7:31:00 AM Oooh, very nice, Abe. This haiku does much more than just paint a picture. It creates wonder and fear of Mother Nature's power. Awesome! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Date: 9/18/2009 7:22:00 PM Good use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Wonderful last line! So much captured in just three lines. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/18/2009 5:49:00 PM Living in California....we can relate to the hungry earth....it seems to like the West Coastal area..... "knock on wood" we aren't near any major fault line...however we have felt a few shakes over the years! (ps... thank you for your kind comments today. Irene was a dear neighbor.) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/18/2009 4:51:00 PM soil growling with hunger..explosion erupts--nice Haiku Abe--Charma Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM Soil growing with hunger pains...wicked line. Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM Soup mail. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 9/18/2009 11:38:00 AM Abe, this is excellent! I will read more of your work! Thank you! Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 9/18/2009 10:23:00 AM You're on a roll with great haiku's, nice work as usual...Raul Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/18/2009 10:00:00 AM Clever Haiku Abe, another Gem>>James Login to Reply