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Earthly Eden

On the cold wooden chair I sit, Writing rhymes of youth. The voice in the distance, Pronounces me uncouth. The ticks of the clock, Taunt me shamelessly. When will the bell screech, I ask repeatedly. Webs of mindless words, Scrawled upon the board, Kill the soul within, As the others only hoard. If only I could memorize, All the superfluous lies. The rose bed in the garden Must be trimmed and wise. The ants and the maggots, Must all have their share at the end. I must return to the soil, Hail the gardener, the godsend!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2010 2:11:00 AM
This one is truely awsome. :) love swairik
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Date: 6/4/2010 10:53:00 PM
Very nicely written piece, albeit a bit morbid...makes you think...of the end...
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:58:00 PM
Good read. Enjoyed your poem. Ellen
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:56:00 AM
gruesome, good job!
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