Earth Without Water:

So many it seems

Live reality, not dreams

Earth without Water

allegoryanalogydreamearthwaterhaiku

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Laura Fuller

May 15, 2017 at 11:20 AM

Hi Budgie, Your haiku is beautiful! I work for EcoRise Youth Innovations, and we would love to feature this poem in a lesson plan about water efficiency we are writing for high school students. May we have your permission to do this, including a full credit and link to you? Please feel free to email me at [email protected] for more information about my nonprofit org and our curriculum project. I'd love to tell you more! Thank you for your consciousness to the Earth! Sincerely, Laura

White Wolf

May 15, 2017 at 6:41 PM

Of course you have my permission! Sounds like a wonderful cause! /|\

John Herlihy

May 6, 2017 at 1:59 AM

Wow, what a picture, what a poem, without mercy as it drags you in. John

Vera Duggan

May 5, 2017 at 11:01 PM

Hi Rick, Earth without water, well that is what Perth is at the moment, no rain, anyway great little Haiku my friend and topped with such a beautiful picture of one of my favourite animals, take care......Vera

Anne-Marie Coreggia

May 5, 2017 at 8:00 AM

Another beautifully expressed thought White Wolf. Reality, it seems, can become vibrant and flow, if only we let dreams touch its very core:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci

May 5, 2017 at 6:50 AM

White Wolf White Wolf. You have no idea the worth of this entry and the truth of it all. Once again your execution of the format is marvelous. The voice and tone are equally marvelous. You have delivered a mini story once again. You were also on role with the format. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful night.