Earth Without Water:

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So many it seems Live reality, not dreams Earth without Water

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Laura Fuller

Date: 5/15/2017 11:20:00 AM

Hi Budgie, Your haiku is beautiful! I work for EcoRise Youth Innovations, and we would love to feature this poem in a lesson plan about water efficiency we are writing for high school students. May we have your permission to do this, including a full credit and link to you? Please feel free to email me at laura@ecorise.org for more information about my nonprofit org and our curriculum project. I'd love to tell you more! Thank you for your consciousness to the Earth! Sincerely, Laura

White Wolf
Date: 5/15/2017 6:41:00 PM

Of course you have my permission! Sounds like a wonderful cause! /|\

John Herlihy

Date: 5/6/2017 1:59:00 AM

Wow, what a picture, what a poem, without mercy as it drags you in. John

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/5/2017 11:01:00 PM

Hi Rick, Earth without water, well that is what Perth is at the moment, no rain, anyway great little Haiku my friend and topped with such a beautiful picture of one of my favourite animals, take care......Vera

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/5/2017 8:00:00 AM

Another beautifully expressed thought White Wolf. Reality, it seems, can become vibrant and flow, if only we let dreams touch its very core:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2017 6:50:00 AM

White Wolf White Wolf. You have no idea the worth of this entry and the truth of it all. Once again your execution of the format is marvelous. The voice and tone are equally marvelous. You have delivered a mini story once again. You were also on role with the format. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful night.

Chris Green

Date: 5/5/2017 6:14:00 AM

Reality is more of a nightmare it seems. Nicely expressed my friend.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/4/2017 9:59:00 PM

Unsustainable. Nicely penned :) xomo

White Wolf
Date: 5/4/2017 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen /|\