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Earth Exhaling

The sun-kissed warm earth exhales beneath the waters Mist, like ghosts, vanish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Brandee Augustus
Date: 6/8/2010 8:38:00 PM
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Your title is intriguing from the get-go! I love that you describe the Earth as exhaling. It acknowledges it as something that's living. Congratulations with this great haiku!
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Amy Green
Date: 6/2/2010 3:50:00 PM
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Like the ambiance of this one. Congrats on your win!
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 6/2/2010 3:27:00 PM
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Congrats BBF on another big win in the Haiku You contest with this one so lovely... enjoy another victory dance please... my Kaledioscope did not get in this time... bummer.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Rick Parise
Date: 6/2/2010 2:33:00 PM
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congrats on your well deserved placement win in my contest!!!!Rick
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/26/2010 4:57:00 PM
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Audrey, What a wonderful haiku this is. Congratulations on your win. It is very deserving. . .every line is superb! Blessings, Connie
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/26/2010 4:48:00 PM
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Congratulations and kudos! Audrey, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/25/2010 11:40:00 PM
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Congrats on your win with this haiku, Audrey! I'm really happy that this won :) Keep writing those winning entries :) and enjoy your weekend :)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/25/2010 1:30:00 PM
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How did you get so good at this? Smiles. Great mood, imagery and imagination.
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James Fraser
Date: 2/24/2010 1:38:00 PM
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Many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 2/24/2010 3:33:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Audrey. Love, Carol
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 2/23/2010 7:15:00 PM
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Hi again.. congrats again.. I just posted a new blog tonight about poetry and its forms.. if u could please comment would be appreciated to build some interest as to the forms used when writing.. tell J also..thankxxx luv..Linda-Marie..
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Marty Owens
Date: 2/23/2010 5:25:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win Audrey...enjoyed...Marty
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/23/2010 5:14:00 PM
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Congratulations Audrey, The mist will evaporate and the warm sun will come out. Today we are heading for 40%c. It's been a long summer. thank you for your lovely words on my 'Stranger"...love Margaret
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 2/23/2010 4:40:00 PM
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Congrats Audrey on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory .. a great Haiku..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/23/2010 2:59:00 PM
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Congratulations. One I really really liked!! And glad you liked Ruth Adams! LUv, Andrea
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/23/2010 1:35:00 PM
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Congrats Audrey...the second line is terrific.BG
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Raul Moreno
Date: 2/23/2010 1:29:00 PM
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Audrey, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2010 8:24:00 PM
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wow, this one is great!!! Luv, andrea
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James Fraser
Date: 2/22/2010 1:14:00 PM
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Very nice Haiku Audrey, good luck in Raul's contest >> James
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 2/22/2010 8:25:00 AM
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OH I like for the contest my friend.. a spooky scenario u have so visualized ... good luck in Raul's contest and appreciate your loving comments and great encouraging words on all my poetry reads... luv.. blessings.. more luv..Linda-Marie..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/21/2010 9:14:00 PM
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GREAT job with this one,Audrey. I kinda got the gist of that tag thing. My problem is that I am so busy trying to do the contest poems, I've got no time to be doing other kinds. haha. So I used one already posted!! Thanks for trying to help me. lUv, Andrea
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/21/2010 7:03:00 AM
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A very interesting take on Raul's photo-really liked your title for this one and your haiku in itself paints a vivid picture --wish you all the best in the contest :)
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Susan Palli
Date: 2/21/2010 1:56:00 AM
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good one!
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Eleanore Bourner
Date: 2/20/2010 6:28:00 PM
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wonderous imagery! i see this scene so well! :) keep it up! ------Ell
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