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Earth Exhaling

The sun-kissed warm earth exhales beneath the waters Mist, like ghosts, vanish

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/8/2010 8:38:00 PM

Your title is intriguing from the get-go! I love that you describe the Earth as exhaling. It acknowledges it as something that's living. Congratulations with this great haiku!

Amy Green

Date: 6/2/2010 3:50:00 PM

Like the ambiance of this one. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 3:27:00 PM

Congrats BBF on another big win in the Haiku You contest with this one so lovely... enjoy another victory dance please... my Kaledioscope did not get in this time... bummer.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 4:57:00 PM

Audrey, What a wonderful haiku this is. Congratulations on your win. It is very deserving. . .every line is superb! Blessings, Connie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/26/2010 4:48:00 PM

Congratulations and kudos! Audrey, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/25/2010 11:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this haiku, Audrey! I'm really happy that this won :) Keep writing those winning entries :) and enjoy your weekend :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/25/2010 1:30:00 PM

How did you get so good at this? Smiles. Great mood, imagery and imagination.

James Fraser

Date: 2/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 3:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Audrey. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 7:15:00 PM

Hi again.. congrats again.. I just posted a new blog tonight about poetry and its forms.. if u could please comment would be appreciated to build some interest as to the forms used when writing.. tell J also..thankxxx luv..Linda-Marie..

Marty Owens

Date: 2/23/2010 5:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Audrey...enjoyed...Marty

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/23/2010 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey, The mist will evaporate and the warm sun will come out. Today we are heading for 40%c. It's been a long summer. thank you for your lovely words on my 'Stranger"...love Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/23/2010 4:40:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory .. a great Haiku..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations. One I really really liked!! And glad you liked Ruth Adams! LUv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/23/2010 1:35:00 PM

Congrats Audrey...the second line is terrific.BG

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/23/2010 1:29:00 PM

Audrey, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2010 8:24:00 PM

wow, this one is great!!! Luv, andrea

James Fraser

Date: 2/22/2010 1:14:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Audrey, good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2010 8:25:00 AM

OH I like for the contest my friend.. a spooky scenario u have so visualized ... good luck in Raul's contest and appreciate your loving comments and great encouraging words on all my poetry reads... luv.. blessings.. more luv..Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2010 9:14:00 PM

GREAT job with this one,Audrey. I kinda got the gist of that tag thing. My problem is that I am so busy trying to do the contest poems, I've got no time to be doing other kinds. haha. So I used one already posted!! Thanks for trying to help me. lUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2010 7:03:00 AM

A very interesting take on Raul's photo-really liked your title for this one and your haiku in itself paints a vivid picture --wish you all the best in the contest :)

Susan Palli

Date: 2/21/2010 1:56:00 AM

good one!

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 2/20/2010 6:28:00 PM

wonderous imagery! i see this scene so well! :) keep it up! ------Ell