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Earth, Air, Water and Fire

Earth is very hot
seeds find rooting hard
few seem to flourish
in the barren earth

Air struggles to cool
plants enough to grow
in the terrible heat 
they start to wither

All suffer from heat
a spark of fire
spreads through the field
the seeds start dying

Water saves the day
giving all vital life
as it soaks land 
putting out the fire
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Empress Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 4:48 AM
So beautiful and informative so well articulated dear shadow: hope you are doing well: pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 11:33 AM
- Great written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write... Have a blessed day.............
May Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:00 AM
Nicely done Shadow, Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 9:38 PM
Wow, I really liked the way you wove the elements together the way you did. That was very clever, Shadow
Rodgers Avatar
February 16, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Dear Shadow, Your poem packs a powerful punch in its simplicity. The stark portrayal of the elements at odds with each other paints a vivid picture of struggle and survival. While the poem is short, it leaves a lasting impression. It reminds us of the delicate balance of nature and the interconnectedness of all things. It also carries a subtle message of hope, emphasizing the power of the right element to bring life back, even in the face of devastation. Thought Provoking. - Blessings, Daniel
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 11:26 AM
TY Daniel for your visit and kind comments hugs Shadow
Rose  Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Each element is a gift to nature and humans alike. You sparked this one beautifully dear poetess, glad your writing such lovely poetry, :)
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 4:05 PM
ty dear its been so long so extra nice to see you tnx for your comments
La France Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Shadow, very nice, I really like your poem, best of luck in the contest, hugs, Constance
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Tyvm Connie pleased you like it hugs Shadow
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