Earth

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Image result for pictures of a good seed growing in the good earth

Seconds pass
                  like our lives
                         through the sieve

Sifting lives
         some continue
                   a few buried

Let's hope many
             land
                  upon earth's good soil
 
Like seeds take root
              grow, develop
                       into mature humans

Whose main goal
                 while upon this earth
                                  is love

Simply spoken
           Love

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/28/2025 5:06:00 AM

A very moving work laced with lovely sentiments, Sara. Well done and congratulations. In turn thank you for congratulating me on Tears Of A Clown Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/28/2025 9:11:00 AM

I appreciate the visit, Howard. Your comments are always uplifting. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/17/2025 11:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Earth" write. Love is the answer but is the world ready for love??? Have a blessed day writing away..........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/22/2025 5:33:00 PM

It would seem that it would be easier to live with than hate, but that is just me saying that. LOL..Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/16/2025 8:10:00 AM

Love is all that matters. And by love I mean agape.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/16/2025 10:12:00 AM

Yes, Victor, I know agape, which is out of our reach as humans, with each breath we take we should be trying to achieve that in our lives. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/14/2025 8:43:00 AM

Yes! Love is needed. Well written :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/14/2025 12:37:00 PM

Heidi, it holds the key to everything. If only all people knew it. Sara K

Len Gasun

Date: 6/13/2025 8:50:00 PM

Love is magical as your amazing poem my dear poet friend Sara! I love and enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing! All the best in the contest! Hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/14/2025 4:36:00 AM

Thank you, Len. It has already been judged in one contest and lost, but it is a good poem with a great message anyway. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/13/2025 5:24:00 PM

enjoyed the "wistful"" ? message, the poem is beautiful have a nice week end

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/14/2025 4:35:00 AM

Yes, Yann, it is wistful like mist blowing in the wind because it won't happen until this earth is restored when Jesus returns to reign. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K