Get Your Premium Membership

Earth - Sky Love

Star worms snort dreaming with mouth agape; dark blue vales attire earth's satin couch; sky furls its far spread, dark, wet, clouds of wings, and he mourns, groans and, disguised as strewn scatters, stealthily flies straight down… Earth spends a glamorous night with her love, sky, and when she feels sun's dawn, she sends her night love; yet remains her secret love on news headlines since farewell tears glisten as dews on blades of grass.
Syllable count: 9/8/7/6/5/4/3/2/1 & 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9 (Ref. howmanysyllables.com) *A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 21, 2020) Dec. 10, 2020 Double Nonet Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/22/2020 5:16:00 AM
Interesting winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 12/21/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Newton, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Login to Reply
Ranaweera  Avatar
Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/21/2020 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, William, for the great comment and the placement!!
Date: 12/14/2020 11:34:00 AM
I especially liked the bottom nonet of earth's love affair with sky at night. That was great romantic metaphor, Newton.
Login to Reply
Ranaweera  Avatar
Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/14/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this impressively great comment!!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things