Placed First in: Tanka-Kaiku Poetry Contest of Oliver Mckeithan
Early Sunrise golden dawn in view new orb splatters orange tints birds’ songs fill the air signs of divine grace from sky spread bright hues of hope on earth gilded orb ascends summer warmth spreads in the space nature starts anew
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