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Placed First in: Tanka-Kaiku Poetry Contest  of Oliver Mckeithan

Early Sunrise

Early Sunrise

golden dawn in view		
new orb splatters orange tints
birds’ songs fill the air
signs of divine grace from sky
spread bright hues of hope on earth

gilded orb ascends
summer warmth spreads in the space
nature starts anew
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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Very lovely. Congrats on the win
Canerdy Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Krish, CONGRATS on your win with this lovely piece. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:50 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
George Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:02 PM
Hi Krish, back to your lovely tanka-haiku poem to congratulate you on your first place win.
Poet Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:35 PM
Poetic writing characterizes a fresh morning. During this season, the sky and trees take on golden hues. Congratulations on your trophy win, dear poet friend.
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:12 AM
- Lovely written tanka/haiku poem ... congratulations on a great winning place in the contest, Krishnanand :) - hugs
Zahid Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your placement poet
Mckeithan Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 10:26 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Krishnanand. Wonderful setting at sunrise.
Guptar Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating the above write and for its placement in the contest sponsored by you. Wish you a pleasant coming new week.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Lovely nature set. Great job here.
George Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:38 AM
The description of the early morn is so poetic. It is a time when nature gets bathed in a golden glow. Lovely entry for the contest. All the Best.
Guptar Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Thank you Valsa for appreciating the above verses and your kind wishes, which mean so much to me. Wishing you a pleasant day.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Love use of golden and gilded in separate parts of poem, and the use of the orb.
Guptar Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above verses. Cheers
Fleming Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 11:42 AM
Nicely penned, Krishnanand. :) john
Guptar Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:31 AM
Thank you friend for appreciating the above poem. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
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