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Early Spring

Early Spring Spider webs embrace rose hips Heavy dew lays on the grass Morning kisses Night's pale lips Requiem...for Winter's pass. 3.19.2017©deborah burch

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/22/2017 6:09:00 PM

this is a lovely little evocation of spring, rich in imagery; i particularly like the third line, and the last line is also very effective

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/22/2017 6:32:00 PM

Charlotte!! Thank you so very much!! BTW...each time I see your name I hear Mellie saying it! Lol. Of course she said "Scarlett"... big Hugggs! Deb

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/22/2017 2:09:00 AM

And such a sweet requiem Deborah. Really good to read, also the contest is up.' take care.)

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/22/2017 6:33:00 PM

Thank you Joe!! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2017 1:34:00 PM

Well said!

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:32:00 PM

:) thank you sweetie!! Big Hugggs!!

Chris Green

Date: 3/21/2017 1:09:00 PM

Beautiful my friend. So light and airy and comforting are your words.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:33:00 PM

Awww. Chris you're so sweet to me!! Thank you! :) Big Hugggs!

Phil Capitano

Date: 3/21/2017 4:41:00 AM

Kiss winter goodbye, well done Deb.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:33:00 PM

Lol. Thank you Phil!! So good to hear from you! Big Hugggs deb