Early Morning Horizon

. Golden sun rising Trapped Gray, cobalt blue clouds

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/9/2011 3:56:00 PM

I used to see those sun/ cloud fights seemingly every day up North and the clouds would invariably win but no such problem here in Fl. Clouds drool and the sun rules! :)

Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/27/2011 8:57:00 AM

given that the sun MUST be coming through a gap in the clouds somewhere at dawn, why is that gap never where I live !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 11:46:00 PM

I hate when the sun gets trapped in clouds! So what was this vision you had, Sara? you have to tell me!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2011 6:43:00 PM

Nice visual created with apt images, sara

Daver Austin

Date: 6/25/2011 10:32:00 AM

Super vision! Love, daver

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2011 6:08:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here.Enjoyed it very much.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 6/25/2011 6:04:00 AM

A super image Sara. Loved it.