Early Morning

On leaves of burnt gold

For a moment dew sparkles

To the ground they fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 24, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Wonderful imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way in this poem. I also wanted to stop by and thank you for contributing to On Butterfly Wings. It is talented people like you that have made the book possible. I hope you are enjoying it as much as I am. Blessings to you. Karen
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May 19, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Beautiful piece, Christian. I look forward to reading more of your work. Donna
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