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Early In the Morn

early in the morn the blind roaster in the corn~ dog gnawing a bone chickens in the pen waiting on the kind old men~ to feed them again cats a meowing rubbing against farmer then~ looking at marsh hens at the waiting pond farmer working in his field~ the ailing horse yield pure alabaster flee faster in the pasture~ "Who knows? We shall see" dreaming of Girlie early in the evening pink~ leaving with a wink 4/25/2020 just musing 5-7-5

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Date: 4/26/2020 9:31:00 PM
Your ending shows such sass!
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Date: 4/26/2020 5:07:00 PM
Love this string of senryu snapshots of a farm morning. Enjoyed the clever rhymes and imagery. Well done, Eve
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:08:00 PM
Your 'musing' is very amusing! Terrific! :) gw
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Date: 4/25/2020 11:49:00 PM
I love sunrises... and mornings when everything awakens... you painted this scene beautifully... gorgeous Eve :) hugs
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Date: 4/25/2020 8:05:00 PM
oh was this from the picture we were recently shown in a contest. Great string. I loved that ending one!!
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