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Early In the Morn

early in the morn
the blind roaster in the corn~
dog gnawing a bone

chickens in the pen 
waiting on the kind old men~
to feed them again

cats a meowing
rubbing against farmer then~ 
looking at marsh hens 

at the waiting pond
farmer working in his field~
the ailing horse yield

pure alabaster
flee faster in the pasture~
"Who knows? We shall see"

dreaming of Girlie
early in the evening pink~ 
leaving with a wink

4/25/2020

just musing

5-7-5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/26/2020 9:31:00 PM
Your ending shows such sass!
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Date: 4/26/2020 5:07:00 PM
Love this string of senryu snapshots of a farm morning. Enjoyed the clever rhymes and imagery. Well done, Eve
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:08:00 PM
Your 'musing' is very amusing! Terrific! :) gw
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Date: 4/25/2020 11:49:00 PM
I love sunrises... and mornings when everything awakens... you painted this scene beautifully... gorgeous Eve :) hugs
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Date: 4/25/2020 8:05:00 PM
oh was this from the picture we were recently shown in a contest. Great string. I loved that ending one!!
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