Early Cresent Moon

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The cresent moon at the bottom in a very dark sky looks like a pregnant woman's hands as she cradles her baby before it is born..Sara

. Early Cresent Moon Cradles core of pitch black darkness Awaits upon bright light

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 2/2/2012 6:22:00 AM

So descriptive in so few lines well done

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/1/2012 9:05:00 AM

Very nice haiku of Cresent Moon of night, loved. Thanks for your comment on my write, bl

M.I.A .

Date: 1/31/2012 7:25:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Sara. love the image you bring here

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/31/2012 10:54:00 AM

Very awesome naturalistic pitch black moon poem! i loved the greatness about this write and how it was all put together! Very good poem! Excellent Work!!

John Rhinem

Date: 1/31/2012 10:08:00 AM

Smile ˜ I have as countless seen people digging through dumpsters and garbage cans for a bite of food ˜ Precious lives dying upon dusty roads for lack of here, in the world we know, my dear beautiful Sara ˜ But their day shall soon come * Roses without the thorns; tears as ashes into the wind of nevermore ˜ Wonderful poem, as the cresent moon cradles the night and yessss, All eyes upon, The Bright Light * My love, Always, John!:) ˜

Daver Austin

Date: 1/31/2012 9:57:00 AM

Wonderful image you've painted, Sara. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 8:36:00 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Sara. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/31/2012 6:15:00 AM

This is so peaceful. I needed to read this in the early morn. Have a great day, Jancarl