Early Blossoms

All England, blinking nervously, is out!
A little mild spell, much to our surprise,
has brightened frowsy February skies.
We sniff the air with nostrils schooled in doubt.

Baffled by balm, the fruit trees have misfired.
Like foolish virgins, hurrying on their scarves,
They've pushed out blooms half-petaled and half-starved.
The coming frosts will slice them like cheese-wire.

And I have loved you far too eagerly.
My half-cocked hopes have withered on the bough.
I should have doled my sweets more meagerly -
then, had I granted space, and time, and light,
your hobbled feelings might have taken flight,
in any time or place - but England. Now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Dear Michael, first, I adore your use of the word "frowsy" and its gentle alliteration of the phrase "frowsy February skies". Second, I adore your masterful use of imagery, emotion and metaphor. I was especially struck by... well, every expressive line actually!! And, how the poignancy builds to the potent, heart-aching finale. Of course, a fav! Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:18 AM
As you always do, Susan, you go right to the heart of the matter. I worried over 'frowsy', but opted for it because - as you rightly identify - it givers a nice alliteration. Now I've got your imprimatur, I know I chose wisely! Thank you! Michael
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 10:58 AM
Wow. This is awesome. Congratulations on the win
Coy Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 1:05 PM
I'm glad you think so. Thank you, Andrea.
Toney Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 8:44 PM
Michael, I enjoyed your clear and relatable metaphor of early blossoms with early love (impatience vs timing). Congratulations on your third place win on Mile 19 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 20 has already started.
Coy Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 9:16 PM
Another astute, concise and on-the-money comment. Thank you, Mark. On we go ...
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