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Early Beach Morning

grey wings soar the clouds
diving and dipping the surf ~
seagull serenade

Written 8/8/21

Contest: Your Favorite August 2021 Poem
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Tania. Enjoyed very much. Love ~ Mala
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Thank you Mala!
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Tania, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
Kitchin Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my placement!
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Wonderful write Tania, soup mail
Kitchin Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Thank you Joe!
Daniel Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 1:41 AM
Lovely haiku, Tania, congratulations on POTD:)
Kitchin Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Thank you Jo!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:47 PM
A POTD, I See. AWESOME, Tania, and thanks so much for your songbird contest.
Kitchin Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Jayasankar Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 7:13 AM
What a beautiful imagery created with this perfect Haiku dear Tania... Enjoyed reading your seagull serenade... Belated congrats on your well deserved POTD... Hugs... ~ Ani
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Anita!
Kerr Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Tania, This is a heavenly Haiku with awesome imagery. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for podium placement in Songbird contest. This is something I will cherish always. Warm Wishes Howard
Kitchin Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Howard and you're welcome!
Peckham Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Perfect haiku. A beautiful picture of nature.
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Thank you!
Proxenos Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:50 AM
Such a magnificent Haiku, congratulations Tania for your poem been honoured with POTD. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Jennifer!
Koplin Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:17 AM
A lovely piece Tania, congratulations on potd!
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Mark!
Gentile Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Tania, I love your nautical haiku! Congratulations on your POTD!!
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:15 AM
All owing to your great encouragement and supports. Thank you for everything.
Kitchin Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Thank you Mike!
Nicole Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Such a tender moment you have described, so calm and soothing. I enjoy watching a "seagull serenade". This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Tania, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Thank you Brandy!
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 5:32 PM
Hi Tania, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day with your beautiful write:-)Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Thank you Alexis!
Watt Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Tania, beautiful haiku snapshot of a morning at the beach. Congrats for your POTD ~ John
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Thank you John!
Fenn Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 12:56 PM
This poem makes me feel peaceful and serene. Thank you for that. Congrats on POTD!
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Jennifer!
Hankins Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations, Tania, on your POTD. Truly an inspiring look at the sky while lying on the beach.
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Milton!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 12:03 PM
No storm for your POTD. Congratulations, my friend. Hugs.
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Victor! hugs
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Tania, congratulations on your POTD. Having grown up, and now living, close to the water I can see and hear the gulls "serenade" through your lovely haiku. Blessings to you!
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Thank you Sam!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day win. What a creative Haiku write. I love the early mornings at the beach. So peaceful. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Paula!
May Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on POTD with this beautiful haiku Tania..
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Joe!
Merryman Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:15 AM
A very picturesque haiku, Tania! I can close my eyes and see as well as hear what's happening. Congrats on your POTD honor! Blessings, Kim M
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Kim!
Peck Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Beautiful Haiku! Full of life. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thank you Ann!
Edmonds  Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 7:35 AM
That’s a lovely Haiku Tania, what I love about a seaside holiday is waking up to a seagull serenade. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Thank you Belle!
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Great painting, Tania, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Thank you Eve, the picture is not mine, but a lovely one I found the fit my poem perfectly!
Wolf Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:57 AM
My best friend's last name is 'Siegal.' He and his wife have 11 kids -- another kind of 'Seagull serenade!' ... Beautifully phrased, Tani, and congrats on POTD, Gershon
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Gershon!
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