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Early Aspirations

The poet was young, just born - her innocent words, forlorn. Still, she was as euphoric as a pig in mud - rolling around the sweet corn. Her wit was swill, but she drilled. Dictionary at her fingertips, she thrilled. Playing, like a piglet with fodder, one day, with practice, her verse killed. 2/10/2023

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Date: 2/11/2023 6:53:00 PM
"Still, she was as euphoric as a pig in mud - rolling around the sweet corn." So visual...love it! Knock um dead, as the saying goes. Great job!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thanks, Joe! :)
Date: 2/11/2023 4:55:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Kim:-) I enjoyed it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2023 7:34:00 PM
Thanks, Edward!
Date: 2/11/2023 3:59:00 PM
Cute poem, Kim. Put in the practice, you'll someday get better. I liked it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 2/11/2023 2:37:00 AM
Pity, she lost her muse. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2023 10:15:00 AM
In this sense, killed means doing something really well :)
Date: 2/11/2023 12:18:00 AM
Well, well, love her eagerness to become better and what better than killing verse!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2023 10:15:00 AM
Yes!
Date: 2/10/2023 4:58:00 PM
Well said, well phrased, Kim! We all started with a blank page and a dull pen...ab
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2023 9:02:00 PM
I look back…not saying how much better..Thanks!

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