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Early Spring

EARLY  SPRING



Skating children stop in park
To stamp in muddy  footmarks:
Messy, black, untidy,
Cold, repulsive, ugly  -
A shallow dirty mire filled 
With broken shards of ice spilled.



All in a moment the sun splashes
The blackened ice and flashes
Brighter than noon in my eyes -
A dazzling overwhelming  surprise,
The dirt and mere mud mayhem
Purified into  a coruscating gem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2012 5:14:00 PM
Children are the greatest at reminding us of what it feels like to hope. Love the write, Syd. namaste! ~N
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