Early

Early in the morning -
no one else is awake
except a squirrel stealing strawberries from my plant outside.
Last year, you died.
I grew a magic garden
and cared for it with pride.
Go away, squirrel.

Early in the afternoon - 
no one else around
except birds building nests in the trees by the gate.
It is sometimes too late
to piece things together,
so why did I wait?
Lucky birds.

Early in the evening -
no one else is crying
except a voice in my head that is always regretting,
never quite forgetting.
Did you know I loved you 
as your sun was setting -
dying early?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Angela, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Maracle Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I enjoyed writing it!
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Hi Angela. I enjoyed your heartfelt poem of early death. For those of us who have journeyed there, no answers are easily forthcoming. I like the form you used. Congratulations on your win! :)
Maracle Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:24 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
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