Eap - True Friends .

Your true friend sees you ...

   By the smile showing pride .

    As the strength by their  side .

     By the trust you'll  confide .

      As the brakes , on life's  slide ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 14, 2010 at 1:06 PM
This uplifting view on friendship is such a day brightener. Friendship is indeed a special gift. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. It is greatly appreciated. Keep up the good writing!!!!!! Karen
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January 25, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Superb words of friendship Sean, nice piece >> James
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January 24, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Powerful piece Sean Regards Déirdre
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January 21, 2010 at 9:27 AM
I love the topic you chose, Sean, and I think you did a great job in this challenge. Thanks for your comment. Andrea
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January 19, 2010 at 3:19 AM
For some reason this made me think of the song by the Beatles "I Want To Hold Your Hand". Great descriptive write of friendship whether it be wife, child, or a friend from childhood. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 17, 2010 at 11:10 AM
You have me smiling with this uplifting poem. Friends are such wonderful gifts. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Have a good day! Karen
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January 16, 2010 at 8:28 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today .Crunch time for th English this weekend both here and in SA Rgds Brian Umpires and refs who need them!
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January 14, 2010 at 2:40 PM
No truer words said!
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January 14, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Another great one! I think you have a niche for this form, Sean. Thank you for sharing and thanks for you kind comments. Love, Lainie
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January 14, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Great poem, thanks so much for your comment, you made me smile, Dor
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January 14, 2010 at 12:39 AM
I count you amongst them Sean.'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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January 13, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Yeah Kelly, I happened by on a day you wrote. The blessings of a good friend, nicely done.
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January 13, 2010 at 10:55 AM
A very enjoyable read. Good luck if you entered the "Rhyme Time" contest. Caryl
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January 13, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Love this......LOVE THAT LAST LINE!!! :) Great work!!
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January 13, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Great perspective on the qualities that make a good friend, Sean. If these are the qualities you offer to others, anyone would be proud to call you a friend. Best wishes for success in Brian's contest with this super eap! Love, Carolyn
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