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Eagles' Jaded Flight

eagles' jaded flight- submit to winter’s lean scrapes…. sparingly content resting after a fill- eagles observe frozen land…. awaiting warm sun sluggish tide retreats- leaving a cold meatless beach…. more eagles searching Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fifth Place Winner ~ "Bald Eagle” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire Nov. 9, 2010

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Date: 10/14/2010 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, Caryl. ....Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:26:00 PM
Many congratulations Caryl for this terrific win.
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:02:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your win in the contest luv.. with this magnificent write.. enjoy tonight ...
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:43:00 PM
YOu really did paint the picture of it, Carly. Congratulations on your fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:52:00 PM
I can see this scene in my mind's eye. Well done, Caryl!! Congratulations on a well deserved win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/14/2010 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2010 4:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 10/14/2010 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your 5th place win and thank you for your comments on mine.Love Sandra
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:13:00 PM
Many congratulations Caryl on your win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 10/14/2010 9:32:00 AM
Great poem that captures the image in the photo very well, Caryl. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:48:00 AM
I enjoyed the way you stuck to the picture and told a story for us thru your haiku. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/9/2010 4:21:00 PM
It is octo. 9, Caryl. Nice haiku on the bald eagle with nice images,
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