Eagle Owl On a Swing

Nocturnal creature signals calm A tender night that's sure to bring, The rising scent of dew-laced balm Where Eagle Owl reels on a swing . I listen how it yelps again Through silhouettes of moonlit trees; From leafy spades along the lane To pivot ‘round in looped trapeze. Eyes ebon guard the sky homeward, Breaking the dark with hushed effect In changing flight, more than a bird As feathers sweep like ruffles flexed. A sight that in my mind I lock Till night unwraps light dusky shawl, While I am charmed by whispered gawk Sweet owlet trills, pervading all. November Standard Contest, Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/18/2017 12:40:00 PM
Each time I read one of your poems, Nette, I am awed by your creative use of language. I enjoyed this one very much. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/18/2017 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Nette ... keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 8/26/2014 2:00:00 PM
Very lovely poem in quatrain form, Nette; love the imagery. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:24:00 PM
Nette, , Congratulations, In Kelly's "Night Owl" contest.
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Date: 8/25/2014 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations Nette. This is lovely. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:15:00 AM
A wonderful piece. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:43:00 AM
Stunning as ever Nette! Many congratulations:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:48:00 PM
I am always enchanted when I listen to the owls calling out.... A lovely poem, Nette! I enjoyed the wonderful imagery of the owl in flight! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/17/2013 4:56:00 AM
Once again, a winner...You, Andrea and Carrie DOMINATE (I'm jealous) Just curious, what is an eagle owl or was that a play on words? Your loyal friend - Tim
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:27:00 AM
Hi nette, congratulations on your win love xx
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Date: 12/12/2013 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:14:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:59:00 PM
Hi Nette,,,,,nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 12:06:00 AM
Great writing Nette. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:54:00 PM
So captivating this precious masterpiece of yours my dear friend Nette! thank you so much for sharing. Kudos! Many HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GREAT WIN! I'm trying to do the Mac Arthur today here while doing multi-task: laundry, cleaning cooking etc. Hope you're doing well esp. that I've heard about a very strong typhoon in our place. Stay safe always. You're always in my prayers. Have a blessed Sun. to you and your love ones! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:42:00 PM
I stand in awe of your talent after reading this gem you have crafted...love your images in this one...makes me want to listen harder for our occasional owl that sits in the trees behind us....congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 8/31/2013 4:21:00 AM
My heart, captivated by the beauty of your poetry, yearns to embrace the night! Excellent! 7!
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:18:00 PM
Oh nette.....I have a hoot owl that serenades me every night....what a lovely poem..you miss are talented and gifted by double portion...:-)
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Date: 8/30/2013 10:14:00 AM
awesome write, Nette - read it twice : )
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:45:00 AM
a very cool image, the eagle owl on a swing!! Good luck again with your contest judging. I just couldn't think of a thing for your contest. But you got some really interesting poetry that I saw here.
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:54:00 AM
Ah, this was just splendidly written!!!! Flying homeward bound...I value that direction.
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Date: 8/30/2013 7:11:00 AM
No one does nature better than you, I really enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 8/30/2013 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful, this is simple a gorgeous and wondrous write my friend! I really loved the intense bird, this owl is awesome within this poem! What a tremendous piece Nette, such an excellent poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:08:00 AM
Interesting topic the owl..Enjoyed reading this one today..It is a very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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