Each Wish Fulfilled

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Each wish fulfilled, if heart be pure Devoid of fears that grout Touch of love is a sure shot cure Let mind be free from doubt God’s will is always done Know that we are His son Luminous, shining one If by love willed Each wish fulfilled 08-May-2022 Quietus

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/8/2022 11:17:00 PM

Wonderful quietus. I tried to write on but failed. I think I'll stick to free verse.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/9/2022 1:10:00 AM

Free verse too isn’t as easy as it looks. It comes easily to you but not to me

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/8/2022 8:46:00 AM

Another beautiful, well-written Quietus, Unseeking Seeker. Your ability to write these and make them exceptionally meaningful is fantastic and much appreciated.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 9:55:00 AM

Thanks for the tip. It makes perfect sense!~

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/8/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Milt. A ‘trick’ that works for me for Quietus is to compose the concluding couplet first, then fitting in the other stanzas subsequently.