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E Equals Mc2

We are a faint star cluster A mere wisp of evening cloud A glimpse into ancient history Our distance cannot be fathomed By your feeble, mortal minds We may be stardust by now

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/26/2013 2:45:00 PM

Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:49:00 PM

Hi Tim, interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:38:00 PM

Tim, . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/22/2013 10:47:00 AM

Very powerfully expressed. Sheeesh! Good one. Congrats on the win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 5:00:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Tim

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/17/2013 10:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I like the ephemeral feel of this poem. It's short but very thoughtful. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks much for entering my contest.

Carl Fraser

Date: 10/12/2013 9:10:00 AM

You must of been there in the begginning Tim, the creator would be proud, nicely done,Carl