E-Rated Poemier: It's Us Till the Sun Disappears

i always believe in us
though if the world don't
i believe the four letters
the popular letters
which amaze men to drown
in a sea none has seen
but hearts coul feel

the four letters "love"
l-long
o-of
v-virtues
e-enternal

for this word love
kept our virtue axed in us
in us we could feel 
completion
though little i was
i saw the spaces between 
my fingers
looking for whom to fill it
have i longed this far
like a tale a writer seeks to 
tell
an orator yells to voice
as i saw you from glances 
far
i just knew it was you

the birds didn't had to fly 
twice for me to know
voices didn't have to be loud
for me to discern it was you 
for i know it's us
driven by the believe in me
that it's us till the sun 
dissapears
i don't want to see another 
take this place
for you have created
a great legacy in me
that our love goes beyond
the love of romeo and juliet
beyond adam and eve 
for if i should be honest
it's between you and i 
not even the quench of 
death could drift what i have
for you my love
till enternity i would still love 
you
even at heaven your name
would that be in my lips
it's us till the sun dissapears 
to you my love
i solace this word to you
like a crimstone
i would engraved your name
in it that it's you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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