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This is written for the " legos nursery rhymes contest" sponsored by Eve Roper. My poem is about dyslexia and how an individual with dyslexia finds comfort and confidence through lego. Dyslexia is a language learning disability, where individuals find letters and  numbers difficult to read and write but are very creative and intelligent souls. I want to dedicate this to my friend subha a strong mother that taught and helped her dyslexic son find light beyond the challenges. He too found comfort through lego when growing up. 

 

 

When stars ascend and illuminate moonlight, he sits in the midst of childhood confusion, bricks in ruby quartz, shape pearl-face of twilight, crafting a castle from artistic vision where secrets of his heart have unlocked windows; letters and numbers, no longer mere shadows, architecting comfort through mini figures that masquerade ticking truth of lonely hours. Dyslexic mind moulds an armored foundation, lego became his true salvation through strife; reflections of kismet, contrived with passion- gilded courage framing the frailties of life, tiny fingers breathe hope through rainbow colors, whilst imagination carves profound pillars, stacking the slanted canvas of dreams to rise, as his strength towers beyond bluest of skies.

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Date: 2/18/2024 11:31:00 PM
The Gift of Dyslexia was a good book i read for a class once... the visualization/ imagination in this gift is something to poeticize 4 sure :D
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Date: 12/2/2023 5:58:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your first place win my dear poet friend Ink. This is a gorgeous lego fun write. I extremely enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 11/29/2023 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful/powerful write. Love It... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 11/29/2023 9:15:00 AM
Nicely penned. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment and congratulations appreciate your support
Date: 11/29/2023 9:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the LEGO contest, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much appreciate your support
Date: 11/29/2023 8:10:00 AM
Well written poem,Ink, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the recognition and for the very unique concept that inspired so many. Im so glad you liked my take. And happy to be placed by you
Date: 11/25/2023 4:15:00 PM
Very lovely Rispetto :-) With best respect, have a nice lovely day ~ AA
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much
Date: 11/14/2023 1:41:00 AM
You've delved deeply into the struggles of a person living with dyslexia, describing so delicately his/ her artistry and creativity. This poem brings back so many heartwarming memories of mine watching my son at play with lego. It was one of the games that revealed to us the beautiful workings of the mind of a dyslexic child. Thank you so much, dear for dedicating this poem to me. I'm touched beyond words.
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:36:00 PM
Thank you island sunshine for visiting and for leaving your sincere thoughts. I have nothing but respect and admiration for all that you are. A strong mother. You deserve it all
Date: 11/5/2023 5:08:00 AM
Oh my, this is a brilliant creation reflecting the pure angelic qualities of your heart as well as the empathy and compassion that you possess for other souls. You truly are a gem of a person my dear Ink! This poem conveys a lot about the struggles of a dyslexic person and how they find comfort through the building blocks of magical imagination- lego. I personally loved lego while growing up and am still fascinated by them, such nostalgia and childhood emotions they bring! Your wordplay is WOWW
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Date: 11/5/2023 7:07:00 AM
I dunno how to thank you really for all your support and kindness, thank you for always feeling my poems and for always being there in every way! Im forever grateful
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Date: 11/5/2023 5:10:00 AM
With impeccable alliteration, imageries, rhymes and perfect syllable count! Inspite of this restricted form, rispetto , you've made your lines flow so well together.. In a very heartfelt way.. That stirs the soul! "tiny fingers breathe hope through rainbow colors, whilst imagination carves profound pillars", "he sits in the midst of childhood confusion, bricks in ruby quartz, shape pearl-face of twilight" Just so marvelous, my dear.. Keep spreading the love and kindness, I deeply cherish your beautiful heart!
Date: 11/5/2023 2:46:00 AM
You have a heart of gold, Ink. This rispetto is outstanding and beautiful. So sad to see someone with a learning disability...and when they get picked on because of it...it makes anyone with a heart cry. Awesome write, dear friend. Hugs
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Date: 11/5/2023 7:05:00 AM
Awn thank you charles, i really appreciate you saying that, yes it hurts my heart seeing them struggle. Im always grateful for your generous support. Truly
Date: 11/4/2023 8:48:00 PM
delicately conveyed - observant, creative, insightful - a pleasure
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much always for your generous support
Date: 11/4/2023 4:28:00 PM
This is amazing. I had dyslexia when I was a child- or something similiar. It was hard for me to learn to read, but I had a patient teacher who helped me overcome it. I love the beautiful imagery in this poem of yours. :)
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:57:00 AM
awwn now you write so well, its always helpful to have patient teachers that guide individuals with learning difficulties, you were blessed. Thank you for always being so supportive and kind truly grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 4:12:00 PM
I think it is ace that you use this medium to highlight the challenges of dyslexia, and the gifting too. Nice work :)
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:28:00 AM
Ah thank you so much sam, truly for always being so supportive. Im grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 3:43:00 PM
great and brilliant inspiration, suxh choices of words and images, as a teacher i often met the "problem", dyslexie can unveil other talents ? thanks for the moving penning
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much truly for your kind feedback. always so grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 2:28:00 PM
Yes, Dyslexia is a very difficult learning handicap to overcome, but there are some new techniques that are very helpful for people who have it. I worked with a child who would learn his spelling words, but when he took the test all the letters would be there, however, not in the correct order. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:05:00 AM
Yes sara i agree they need patient nurturers and tutors, they learn when done in a different way, thank you so very much for your visit and kind support always grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 12:08:00 PM
Interesting to make this connection and turn it into a poem. Because I tend to meet adults who have already overcome the challenges it's easy to forget there was a point where there was frustration and fear.
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:02:00 AM
Dear Dilly Dally, i agree i know few poets too that are dyslexic, but to think of all that they may have endured as kids truly is so sad. Some places in the world people are not so aware of dyslexia still. Thank you so much for your visit and for enlightening me on ekphrasis i just posted my first ever! Ah so grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 9:22:00 AM
Beautifully written poem about a subject that doesn't get the attention it needs, plus I loved lego as a child then when my children came along I got to play with it again. It is a great learning aid as in imagination and creativity development
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Date: 11/4/2023 9:48:00 AM
Ah yes my son used to love lego too, nostalgic. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and being so supportive, grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 7:10:00 AM
Dear Ink, This poem is utterly excellent in terms of imagery and syntax. You have a deep and honest way of putting things together. I am astounded by your ability and the amazing dedication you have offered to such an important topic. Your exceptional poem contributes much to raising awareness regarding dyslexic persons. Your last lines are brimming with optimism and inspiration. I'm favoring this. I know Eve is going to like this.
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:32:00 AM
Ah dear Sotto this is so kind of you to say i hope so, i appreciate your generous support always truly
Date: 11/4/2023 6:12:00 AM
crafting a castle from artistic vision where secrets of his heart have unlocked windows; letters and numbers, no longer mere shadows---a ray of light through your words on this profound topic that sadly affects many. Brilliantly done in this form with syllable constraints. Such hope and inspiration in the ending lines! A FAVE, my friend.
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:31:00 AM
Ah Vijay you are always so kind and so supportive, thank you so very much for always being so kind, im forever grateful
Date: 11/4/2023 5:43:00 AM
a wonderful poem with stunning use of language; i'd be proud to write something like this! i didn't even notice the rispetto form on first reading, but that's good as it means the writing itself is excellent
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:28:00 AM
This means alot coming from you talented soul, its my first time doing this form and im so happy to receive positive feedback from you. Thank you so very much dear Charlotte
Date: 11/4/2023 5:16:00 AM
Oooooo crafting a castle from artistic vision…ooo that line!!!! that masquerade ticking truth of lonely hours…. Aaah I feel the lonely hours too.. Dyslexic mind moulds an armored foundation… mmm the strength… imagination carves profound pillars,…beautifully true! The pillars indeeed.. sometimes … I close my eyes n see u waving into the sky.. wanting clouds!! In the middle of the night ..XD!! his strength towers beyond bluest of skies.!! Ur amazingness do the same thing to my sky also aee papi!
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much always papi! Im so happy to know you enjoyed reading this
Date: 11/4/2023 4:36:00 AM
dear Ink--your poem is appropriate for the contest and it resonates with me. My younger brother was dyslexic. During his childhood, dyslexia was misunderstood. He wrote ever word backwards. The only way to read his writing was to hold it up to a mirror. One of his teachers actually berated him. The only thing that soothed him was his box of "Lincoln Logs," the 'Legos' of the 60s. He struggled academically & socially but became a gifted musician, always seeing the world differently. Well done!
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:26:00 AM
Beautiful sara, that must have been so hard for your brother, back in the day teachers and so many werent aware I suppose of dyslexia. I was watching a movie about a dyslexic child and what he went through, truly heart wrenching! I was literally crying my eyes out throughout and even after the movie i was crying, sigh! It breaks my heart to see kids suffer and being treated wrong for their troubles. I can only imagine how it mus have been for your little brother. Thank you for sharing your experience. Appreciate your support always
Date: 11/4/2023 4:32:00 AM
So emotional … it’s so sad . Great write and thank you for creating awareness .
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:23:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much
Date: 11/4/2023 4:26:00 AM
Wow..I’m just reeling in this precious and beautiful piece, my beautiful soul sis..the way you express such depth and truth..I’m amazed by you and your artistry..and such a beautiful dedication to a beautiful soul and her precious soul..I can’t help but tear up reading this brilliance. So truly heart touching and soul stirring! As always, inked to perfection with so much beauty and courage I feel in your piece..through your ink
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:23:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much my beautiful soul sis, you are always so beautifully biased and you see beauty in everything i write or say. Truly blessed to have you

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