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Dysfunctional Inner Peace

The scorpions creeping out from words slowly, acutely framing where judgement claims the higher position unconditionally lone vulture hanging over its unsuspecting prey ready to pounce once so blind ambitions reverberates back as unqualified honours least deserved Pompous narcissistic elements with nonsensical fruitless talent held within egotism where fools of choice becomes one’s ability under total admiration publicly declared in lonely self-centeredness becomes a sterile reflection back to oneself blinded by arrogance As friends become nemesis’s unnamed obstacles of your vainglorious rise Sounding echos reverberates a never ending recording of undeserving self-pride knowing more than all of what is right claiming the false prize for me, me, me It matters not that lonely superiority must accept the great divide False praise their claims attention that inflames your senses unjustly wise crying regrets a prize is a prize nothing to be gained under the sun or moon striving after winds have blown a gale force within hidden torment the wreckage that's left after such destruction can only be found wanting a co written piece in unrhymed quatrains by Donna Loughman and Liam McDaid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/5/2018 1:52:00 PM
Hello Donna and Liam you both did a good job writing this poem.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2021 10:43:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup. enjoy ytour day my friend.
Date: 2/18/2018 5:52:00 AM
Hello Donna, A truly great co-write here by you and Liam!! The imagery of this Quatrain is all-powerful and wondrously done. A FAVE!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/20/2018 3:17:00 PM
Gary, Thank you so much for your comment...especially for the fave! Have a very blessed week my friend:-)
Date: 2/15/2018 12:36:00 PM
- Dear Donna - A wonderful writing of you and Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/17/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! Have a blessed weekend:-)
Date: 2/14/2018 9:28:00 AM
truly a pleasure mixing ink with you on this donna i think it sings out in its contents wishing you a blessed week pal
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/17/2018 5:02:00 AM
Liam, thank you..as always it’s an honor to write with you my friend:-)
Date: 2/13/2018 5:14:00 PM
Brilliant!! Top shout outs, keep on typing up those verses. Creative wonder of wonders... James
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/13/2018 6:44:00 PM
Hi James, you are too kind my friend:-) Thank you so much for commenting! Have a blessed week! Donna
Date: 2/10/2018 8:11:00 AM
Great collaboration, you and Liam wrote this very well..
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Donna Loughman
Date: 2/13/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Silent One! Writing with Liam is always a pleasure. Thank you again for commenting:-) Have a blessed week! Donna

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