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Dylan Who

we'd drink something that'd give good boot something strong he'd tell me about Dylan T the boathouse the scenery how he'd party with the worst of them show 'em how it's done and maybe somewhere between the laughs and the re-fills it would spiral downward to past loves ideals the occasional awkward stare and silence Then we'd part ways fluff-brained wobbly and forget what we'd learned about each other by the morning.

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Date: 12/5/2013 6:15:00 PM
This is very "real life" love it! Congratulations on your win....
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Violet Darling
Date: 12/6/2013 7:17:00 AM
Thank you for swinging through. Win? (No idea what I won) still trying to feel my way around the place :)
Date: 11/30/2013 8:36:00 PM
This is an awesome poem with brilliant creativity and originality. Well done :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 2:16:00 AM
I love this one Violet! It borders between happy times and sadness. Happiness in the moments spent and sadness in the memories lost. Well done!
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