Notes About The Poem

Dwindling Summer Afternoons

I sit in a meditative mood under a canopy
the sun tries in vain above to pierce through.
A playful light breeze cajoles the senses
while life delightfully carries on about.

Summer lingers and we strive to enjoy
every graceful afternoon as it stretches 
longingly and mercifully into that magic hour
where the sun sets to retire in its flamboyant glory.




AP: 3rd place 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Alhemaidy Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 2:21 AM
Very nice read!
Gauthier Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:12 PM
Much appreciated, Abdullah ~
Smith  Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 10:00 PM
A playful light breeze cajoles the senses - I love this image.
Gauthier Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:12 PM
Thanks, Alison ~ have a lovely day
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