Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Verse

Dwelling 'Mongst Angels

Pilot daydreaming

Head in clouds

Lost bearings



Forgot parachute

Now playing

Harp

With angels

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 6 in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Septolet" Contest - July 2011

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Lee Ramage July 21, 2011 at 8:28 PM Great work as usual. Lee

Wilma Neels July 21, 2011 at 4:13 AM Yours is stunning Bob :) congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2011 at 11:47 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Bob. Love, Carol

Jack Horne July 20, 2011 at 9:39 AM Many congratulations, Bob : )

Joseph Osita July 20, 2011 at 12:48 AM This is very nice! Many congrats on your meritorous win

David Williams July 20, 2011 at 12:41 AM hey Bob well done i liked it first time i read it, congrats, David

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2011 at 8:49 PM wow, robert...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2011 at 7:38 PM hahaha, the first funny one I've seen. Congrats. good thing he was not piloting a commercial jet??

Elaine George July 19, 2011 at 7:15 PM lol. Great Septolet, Bob. Thanks for sharing. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

Black Eyed Susan July 19, 2011 at 4:21 PM ooh. how devastating for the pilot. i;m glad he ended up somewhere nice! a powerful write. congratulations on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2011 at 3:49 PM Super congrats Bob with this fantastic win for a phenomenal poem my friend.. very creative luv..enjoy another wow wonder..

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2011 at 3:26 PM Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta July 19, 2011 at 2:51 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Bob

David Williams July 17, 2011 at 9:19 AM this reminds me never to go parachuting. very good Bob good luck with it. many thanks for your comments, as my old teacher used to say "needs to try harder" so will keep trying for the no. 1 spot. David.

Kash Poet July 17, 2011 at 3:32 AM Witty write here Robert...enjoyed.Best wishes.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 16, 2011 at 8:08 PM cool one Bob .. cleverly penned my friend.. great visual.. another top notch winner luv.. thankxxx for update.. getting a laptop next week just for extra computer access in home.. oh .more tech ..good luck in the contest..

Johnny Sumler July 16, 2011 at 7:19 PM This is an amazing write Bob! Goodluck with this little gem!

Judy Ball July 16, 2011 at 6:52 PM Oohoohoo When your head's in the clouds your feet should be firmly planted on the ground. Love watching the pilots perform but it can get scarey. Great job. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta July 16, 2011 at 6:33 PM Thanks for the entry, Bob

Don Johnson July 16, 2011 at 4:09 PM Oh deer how, sad its queer, i betta change me undies, hermaphradites in hevvin here, i'll be gone by monday:) Good on ya Mr Hope!!! Don

Francine Roberts July 16, 2011 at 4:07 PM very witty entry, good luck in the contest Bob