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Dwelling 'Mongst Angels

Pilot daydreaming Head in clouds Lost bearings Forgot parachute Now playing Harp With angels Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 6 in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Septolet" Contest - July 2011

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Lee Ramage

Date: 7/21/2011 8:28:00 PM

Great work as usual. Lee

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/21/2011 4:13:00 AM

Yours is stunning Bob :) congratulations on your win in the contest ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Bob. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2011 9:39:00 AM

Many congratulations, Bob : )

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/20/2011 12:48:00 AM

This is very nice! Many congrats on your meritorous win

David Williams

Date: 7/20/2011 12:41:00 AM

hey Bob well done i liked it first time i read it, congrats, David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 8:49:00 PM

wow, robert...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 7:38:00 PM

hahaha, the first funny one I've seen. Congrats. good thing he was not piloting a commercial jet??

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 7:15:00 PM

lol. Great Septolet, Bob. Thanks for sharing. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/19/2011 4:21:00 PM

ooh. how devastating for the pilot. i;m glad he ended up somewhere nice! a powerful write. congratulations on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 3:49:00 PM

Super congrats Bob with this fantastic win for a phenomenal poem my friend.. very creative luv..enjoy another wow wonder..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 3:26:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 2:51:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Bob

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2011 9:19:00 AM

this reminds me never to go parachuting. very good Bob good luck with it. many thanks for your comments, as my old teacher used to say "needs to try harder" so will keep trying for the no. 1 spot. David.

Kash Poet

Date: 7/17/2011 3:32:00 AM

Witty write here Robert...enjoyed.Best wishes.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 8:08:00 PM

cool one Bob .. cleverly penned my friend.. great visual.. another top notch winner luv.. thankxxx for update.. getting a laptop next week just for extra computer access in home.. oh .more tech ..good luck in the contest..

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/16/2011 7:19:00 PM

This is an amazing write Bob! Goodluck with this little gem!

Judy Ball

Date: 7/16/2011 6:52:00 PM

Oohoohoo When your head's in the clouds your feet should be firmly planted on the ground. Love watching the pilots perform but it can get scarey. Great job. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/16/2011 6:33:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Bob

Don Johnson

Date: 7/16/2011 4:09:00 PM

Oh deer how, sad its queer, i betta change me undies, hermaphradites in hevvin here, i'll be gone by monday:) Good on ya Mr Hope!!! Don

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 4:07:00 PM

very witty entry, good luck in the contest Bob