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Dwelling 'Mongst Angels

Pilot daydreaming

Head in clouds

Lost bearings



Forgot parachute

Now playing

Harp

With angels

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 6 in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Septolet" Contest - July 2011

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Lee Ramage Date: 7/21/2011 8:28:00 PM Great work as usual. Lee Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/21/2011 4:13:00 AM Yours is stunning Bob :) congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/20/2011 11:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Bob. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/20/2011 9:39:00 AM Many congratulations, Bob : ) Login to Reply

Joseph Osita Date: 7/20/2011 12:48:00 AM This is very nice! Many congrats on your meritorous win Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/20/2011 12:41:00 AM hey Bob well done i liked it first time i read it, congrats, David Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/19/2011 8:49:00 PM wow, robert...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/19/2011 7:38:00 PM hahaha, the first funny one I've seen. Congrats. good thing he was not piloting a commercial jet?? Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/19/2011 7:15:00 PM lol. Great Septolet, Bob. Thanks for sharing. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 7/19/2011 4:21:00 PM ooh. how devastating for the pilot. i;m glad he ended up somewhere nice! a powerful write. congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/19/2011 3:49:00 PM Super congrats Bob with this fantastic win for a phenomenal poem my friend.. very creative luv..enjoy another wow wonder.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/19/2011 3:26:00 PM Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/19/2011 2:51:00 PM My congratulations on this win in my contest, Bob Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/17/2011 9:19:00 AM this reminds me never to go parachuting. very good Bob good luck with it. many thanks for your comments, as my old teacher used to say "needs to try harder" so will keep trying for the no. 1 spot. David. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/17/2011 3:32:00 AM Witty write here Robert...enjoyed.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/16/2011 8:08:00 PM cool one Bob .. cleverly penned my friend.. great visual.. another top notch winner luv.. thankxxx for update.. getting a laptop next week just for extra computer access in home.. oh .more tech ..good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply

Johnny Sumler Date: 7/16/2011 7:19:00 PM This is an amazing write Bob! Goodluck with this little gem! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 7/16/2011 6:52:00 PM Oohoohoo When your head's in the clouds your feet should be firmly planted on the ground. Love watching the pilots perform but it can get scarey. Great job. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/16/2011 6:33:00 PM Thanks for the entry, Bob Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 7/16/2011 4:09:00 PM Oh deer how, sad its queer, i betta change me undies, hermaphradites in hevvin here, i'll be gone by monday:) Good on ya Mr Hope!!! Don Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 7/16/2011 4:07:00 PM very witty entry, good luck in the contest Bob Login to Reply