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Dutch Struck Out

Watts gnu Asked Sou Knot much Said Dutch Ewe're late Four date Takes walk Small talk Tries hug Slugs mug Steels kiss Near miss Street car Two bar Byes bier Ayes blear Holds hand Grate band Lets dance Know chance Yew're drunk Yew punk He heaves She leaves Head tossed Git lost Sou miffed Left swift Ewe're tight Good nite

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/14/2020 12:08:00 PM

You missed replying to Gershon. He deserves a reply, don't you agree Pangie xx Maybe you were just busy?

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/14/2020 12:12:00 PM

We all make mistakes..let me know if you ever find me so doing?.,,please? Thanks Pangie xx.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/14/2020 12:10:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie. Another example of my nonsense! Bob

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/31/2020 2:12:00 PM

Oh, what a great story told in footle form, Bob! Love all the puns, so I have a new Fave. Hugs, Carolyn

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/31/2020 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn. Honored you consider it a fav. Stay safe - Bob

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/28/2020 4:33:00 PM

G'day Bob ... apart from being a fun footle, this is proof why learning the English language must be a nightmare - thanks again Bob - Lindsay

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/28/2020 5:12:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay! Eye thru inn sum homophones two liven up thee rite. Best on yew deer friend - Bob

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/28/2020 3:38:00 AM

Love these Bob, have just started doing them, theyre so addictive. Tom

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/28/2020 2:57:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. Footles are a challenge to pull together but are fun in doing so. I look forward to more of them from you very versatile quill - Bob

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2020 4:02:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Just great, Bob. You are the master of the Fun and Funny Footles! Let's just say that you put the foot in the footle! Love this one. Thanks, Gershon

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/27/2020 3:50:00 PM

Extremely witty! Some went over my pointed head. Just exhausted, sorry! Up till 5 am penning my sonnet that I feel so gratified with)))) We will both enjoy tonight! Panagiota xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/27/2020 5:16:00 PM

I tried to be cute and use homophones which makes for puzzling interpretation. Thank you, Pangie, I cherish your support, comments and encouragement - Bob