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Dutch Hill Park was a small park where my brothers, our friends and I spent most of our time growing up between kindergarten and graduation. It is the foundation of most of our childhood memories. I loved that place more than any place I've ever been or will ever be.
I took a walk down Columbia Street Back to the place where we used to meet Where we played as kids until after dark And hung out together up at Dutch Hill Park Although alone, I could hear the sound Of laughter coming from the merry go round Sometimes we'd meet there in the early dawn The dance hall, pavilion and the swings are gone I saw those pine trees and I thought of you And all the crazy things we used to do Like sleeping out underneath the stars Hanging upside down from the monkey bars A swing made from a rope and an old tire We baked potatoes on an open fire Squirrel nut zippers and an RC coke Transistor radio and we'd have a smoke We walked in the woods and we climbed some trees We scratched our faces and we skinned our knees Never dreaming that it would ever end If I could, I'd do it all again my friend Those memories I have will never part I carry Dutch Hill Park inside my heart And all those memories of yesteryear Heading back home now I shed a tear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/22/2013 8:52:00 AM
nostalgia to the nth degree......very well written and enjoyable to read.
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Date: 2/9/2013 5:25:00 AM
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:31:00 AM
This Poem is a gem so beautiful and lovely my friend that it is difficult to put my feelings in words. I really want to thank you for giving an opportunity to read such a beautiful work of creative writing. It really revived the sweet memories of yester years and for a moment I thought that the 'Columbia Street' is like my 'Company Bag' where I used to walk with my friends like you. Great write that I am going to make as one of my fav. Poems & thank you for your comments. With Best Wishes
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:48:00 AM
Love the nostalgia on this poem Vince. Makes us long for what seems wonderful times in our early life. Good memories to cherish. love phyl
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:01:00 AM
Vince, this is so sad and so well done, I think almost any good poet over 40 or 50 has a poem like this somewhere in his or her collection. I love it. Pure nostalgia
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:52:00 PM
VINCE... some times it's hard to part and go back... i mean go back and than part... memories.. is all we have..always..pd
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:23:00 PM
love it Vince. Brought it all home so well. I haven't been on the soup much of late but thanks for your acknowlegement to get me to look at a couple of your poems again. You've alot of talent my friend. That's for sure.
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:52:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Vince, love those poems about yesterday, when we were kids, also those were such innocent days, something that seems very hard to find for our kuds today. really like this. harry
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:33:00 PM
wheww....Vince, I have these moments too....remembering care-free times in high school when we roamed the city as we liked at night....(our parents had no idea, they were asleep!) convinced of our immortality.....discussing how we would behave when we joined the race....good one, thanks! jimbo
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:00:00 AM
This is such a beautifully moving nostalgic write, Vince :) I really enjoyed this glimpse back--very touching how you ended this-- and thank you for passing by my poem and the birthday wishes :D
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:36:00 PM
Love this nostalgic piece, my friend. Thanks for your kind words
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:43:00 AM
i like this part of you vince... sentimental and full of heart... beautifully composed!.. thanks for your greetings and :) huggs to you
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:39:00 PM
VERY nice stuff here, Vince!... Carries me back to some of my own favorite memories... You captured it perfectly. Haven't been on the Soup for a while and it's nice to catch up again. Thanks for your kind comments and support in the past...looking forward to reading more of your latest. - Tim
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:24:00 PM
I am just back again, to thank you for checking out some of my older poems that get lost in space! Most of us aren't as thoughtful as you, to look through the older poems, some that even I have forgotten. And I'm very appreciative that you took the time to do so. Thanks Vince!
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:09:00 PM
very nice I'm glad I stopped in for a peek!
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Date: 2/20/2012 2:35:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work about your memories..Enjoyed reading of a few experiences in your life..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Have you heard from Jake?...Sara
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:21:00 PM
Nice descriptiveness and rhyming in this work that reminds me a bit of "Cherry Hill Park" by Billy Joe Royal. Good work Vince.
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Date: 2/16/2012 8:49:00 PM
You have always had a knack of taking me back to my own childhood....I think, though we grew up on different sides of the country, we share similar memories. (yes , I was a tomboy type girl, and tagged along with my big brother quite a lot !) Another nice adventure you have taken me.....thanks!!
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