An Excire: A vignette and Suzette Swan Arc combo—i.e. it’s one type of prosimetrum, such as haibun and tanka prose. See my article:
Excire: A Prosimetrum of Breath and Drift | PoetrySoup.com
“Suzette” means “lily”.
I am looking out my dining room window, overlooking the birdbath in the small garden of my flat. The arum lilies have added a new bloom—just as the last one is dying off—beside the grave marker of my pet: not just any dog, but my trusty emotional support animal. A black bird takes an early morning bath in the yet icy-cold water, while another waits impatiently for its turn. the arum lilies are exceptionally showy this year— the etymology of my name captured by the S f U l Z o E w T e T r E s it’s five months since his passing emotions plumose …
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