Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Dust on the Ground

Dust on the Ground
Written, August 11, 2026,  For Poetry Challenge: One-Syllable Words
Rules: All words should be one syllable.
August 10- August 16, 2026

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The cold night sweeps in,
the stars hide; the sky dulls—
wind hurts deep,
and dust coats the ground.

Pain is a wide cut,
weighs the heart—
with more beat,
tears fall slow,
while eyes weep.

Hope sparks bright,
warm lights rise—
hands stay tight,
dreams lift, then drift,
and fade from sight.

Light breaks dawn,
arms reach out—
peace moves soft,
home leans near
love finds its way—
and stays true.

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Howard Kerr August 24, 2026 at 4:08 AM Your verse, Sotto, is an oddysey that overcomes the stipulated one syllable requirement which is a hurdle. In the process you composed an endearing and intensely emotional discourse which is compelling. The power of heartfelt connection transcends the mundane. “The stars hide, the sky dulls,” and “Light breaks dawn and arms reach out,” create poetic vistas.🔥🔥🔥 I value your judgement and will act on your advice, regarding my writing and thanks for your comments. Howard

Dorothy Gibbons August 13, 2026 at 9:15 AM You cracked the one syllable Sotto excellent ✍️✨hugssss friend

Joanna Daniel August 13, 2026 at 3:55 AM Awesome writing, Sotto:)

Christopher Delegans August 12, 2026 at 11:30 PM Not easy to stack this much meaning against single syllable words. Impressive write!

Joe Maverick August 12, 2026 at 11:59 AM Great meaning here Sotto, may you get a Top spot.'

Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2026 at 11:16 AM - Through the light ... one finds love even though it may feel hopeless ... a lovely poem with only one syllable in each word :) - A fun challenge, Las :) - hugs