Dust From Her Feet

She walks like a traveller in her home 
a once familiar thing, lost to her
And bright-eyed watches the same night sky 
that demonstrates new things to her,
orchestrating new patterns for her in the stars to find 
and paving beams of light across leaves 
that were strewn for her
by the dawn wind slaking the limbs of her own trees
for whatever thing lost that still is,
She searches the dust from her own feet 
that she's brought from another land in a dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Another great piece, but I would suggest removing a few "hers" they are not all needed and draw power away from the read.
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Creative and expressive write with deep meanings, Erin
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Good one that I really enjoyed reading this eve...Sara
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