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Dust Bunny - Nursery Rhyme

“Oh, dust bunny, dust bunny, underneath my bed, go hop along, go hop along, now shoo!” But this funny dust bunny sang a song instead, a lullaby for little Mary Lou: “Lay down gently on your pillow, rest your weary little head, and listen to the soothing sound of rain. For I will keep you safe from monsters underneath your bed, just close your eyes so sleep can come again … Just close your eyes and sleep will come again.” 3/24/2021 Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 4/26/2022 12:04:00 PM
Very cute and a brilliant entry, best of luck in the contest Eric. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/24/2021 2:54:00 PM
How creative ... Panagiota
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Date: 7/20/2021 2:15:00 PM
very sweet and so unexpected, delightful rhyme.
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:32:00 PM
Back to let you know you have soup mail. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:21:00 AM
Nice rhyme.
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Date: 4/12/2021 12:40:00 PM
Hi Eric, what a wonderful lullaby soothing, loving, touching and a win! Congratulations my friend ever so cute! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Eric Cohen
Date: 4/13/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thanks so much and good to hear from you, Jennifer. I meant to tell you how much I enjoyed your nursery rhyme with Martians calling earth. ~Eric
Date: 4/7/2021 1:25:00 PM
what a cute rhyme Eric congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:10:00 PM
- A lovely and creative nursery rhyme, Eric :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eric Cohen
Date: 4/7/2021 9:09:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise. Your comments always bring me a smile. I noticed from your comment to Jennifer about your upcoming surgery. I will keep you in my thoughts. All The best. ~Eric
Date: 4/6/2021 10:57:00 AM
I didn't know dust bunnies could sing! Eric, congrats on your 1st place win with this cute lullaby! Blessings, Kim M
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Eric Cohen
Date: 4/6/2021 8:01:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Loved your entry. ~Eric
Date: 4/5/2021 10:26:00 PM
Hi Eric, I really enjoyed your “nursery rhyme”poem. Congratulations on your first place win. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:11:00 PM
Eric, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Eric Cohen
Date: 4/6/2021 8:05:00 PM
Thanks again for sponsoring another enjoyable contest, Eve. So many great entries. You've struck a chord with these nursery rhyme contests. See you on your blog.
Date: 3/24/2021 11:17:00 AM
ha! i love the idea of a dust bunny singing a lullaby! good luck in the contest, eric...
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Eric Cohen
Date: 3/24/2021 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. Glad you stopped by. Your work is impressive. Will leave some comments. Best. ~Eric

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