Dust Bowl

Oklahoma 
	electric blue skies,
	sun and wild winds
	tragic black dirt clouds 
	sand sifting through cracks 
	dry stalks
	bones - only bones 
	California
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ferry Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 10:20 PM
Great write Myself, rather be at the Rose Bowl.............rick
Jordan Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Or any other Bowl, from what I understand about the Great Plains in the 1930's. Jack
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 11:06 PM
oh, yes, this really makes me think of that great novel. I never read it. Steinbeck? But I saw the movie and it was great.
Jordan Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Okay... I'll admit that I never read it either, which says a lot about my lousy undergraduate education as well as my lethargic adult life. J
Jones Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 7:09 PM
This really got to me Jack...most of my family went thru this and yes , grapes of wrath style, went to CA. But back home now...great job.....Donna
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:51 PM
My family didn't make the CA trek, but certainly lived through hard times in Oklahoma and Texas. I'm not sure how I wound up back here. There must be some sort of weird magnetism - and very fine people too. Jack
Ashford Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Lucid visuals Jack and it says much with an economy of words. Enjoyed.
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Thanks, Eric. I appreciate the nice comment. Jack
Harper Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Nice tight capture of the time, almost like one of those stalks, excellet.
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Given the current drought, I can only hope the Dust Bowl doesn't return. Thanks for reading. Jack
Konos Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Good One! Welcome Back...Premium Member....
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 9:35 AM
Short and not so sweet, I'm afraid. Thanks for reading it. Jack
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