Dust Bunnies and Cobwebs

Dust bunnies live under my bed,
And they are starting to mess with my head.
I sweep them away,
But away they won't stay,
They bring along friends instead.

The cobwebs are naughty, too,
But I do what I have to do.
With a broom and a cloth,
I remove signs of sloth,
And I bid those cobwebs adieu!


3/7/12  for Francine's "Cobwebs and Dust" contest
Theme: Cobwebs and Dust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dufresne Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 5:49 PM
really well done Kim. I enjoyed your ingenious poem in limerick form, congrats to you
Arowolo Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Nice Limerick,Kim.Congratulations on your win with this fine piece......
Brown Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 12:39 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your win in Francine's "Cobwebs And Dust" contest Kim. Love, Carol
Burch Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 10:58 PM
congratulations Kim!!!on your win!! Well Done my friend!! 'Adieu!' lol huggsss,love deb
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 9:49 PM
congrats Kim on a stellar win for this stunning write for the contest.. cleverly crafted luv..
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 7:38 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Kim, great limerick
Alienmermaid Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Adorable!
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:18 AM
being a male ....dust bunnies are hale, an hearty as well..under my bed....come by if ya want ....i'll have to instead...but winter will beat me instead... love your poetry mate...
Horne Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:46 PM
LOL, love this witty write, Kim
Dufresne Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:04 AM
good reality write Kim. You wrote on a world wide problem for sure.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 6:05 AM
A clever limerick, Kim. I love it! Best wishes in the contest. I'm drawing a blank with this one. Hopefully, when I clean today, I'll be inspired. LOL... Blessings, Rhondal
Pettit Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 11:30 PM
Get one of those Swiffer Sweepers that are advertised on this site all of the time. Those ads pop up so frequently and I'm sick of seeing them. Your double limerick is a nice job and a joy to read.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 11:16 PM
hey, dust bunnies had immediately come into my head when I first saw this contest. I LOVE what you did with them in this contest. Good luck with your fine entry.
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