Dust

Particles of dust your spores visible in light lightly coating all

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/8/2013 3:25:00 PM

LOVELY LINDA I WILL GIVE YOU A RING TOMORROW JUST CANT TEXT ON THIS SITE SLOWLY I AM WORKING IT OUT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2013 2:39:00 PM

yes, that does define it!! Have you seen those documentaries showing the bacteria all around us? I bet spores are not very pleasant to see either! Soupmail.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2013 2:51:00 PM

Trust me they are not. Very scarey in fact lol. ok will look ty for reading

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/8/2013 7:14:00 AM

It is everywhere. Never thought about it in this way.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2013 2:50:00 PM

hi Duke sometimes we need to think out of the box. Ty for your support of my work Shadow x smile

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/7/2013 11:24:00 PM

Wow yes, i hav always wantd to write about these dust particles dat glitter in sunlight. And u pennd a remarkable splendid haiku on it.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2013 4:09:00 AM

Yes Dust so fine or gritty let your imagination take flight become one with it then try again theres so many ways to discribe dust gl. Ty for enjoying my attempt Shadow x smile

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/6/2013 8:30:00 PM

Interesting Haiku I enjoyed this! Laura :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2013 7:55:00 AM

yes it is a bit lol ty for reading Shadow x smile